Luke swam before the race. Luke raced against “plenty” of children.  Luke won a lollipop. Luke felt nice, he liked the lollipop. Luke went across on the pool after he was done. Luke swam quickly. It was a big pool. There was a ladder to climb in. And after he was all done making it across, he jumped on the trampoline with his shoes off. And then he told his mom that he won the race, and went across the pool, and jumped on the trampoline, and got a lollipop. His mom said that we was not allowed to have a lollipop.  The End.

(The original story: Luke swam. Luke won.)